tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5782255865112999690.post8701163857684192241..comments2023-04-25T09:20:50.034-06:00Comments on My writing, and thoughts related to.: A Morning (Working Title)Kevin Shayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14248549536747681613noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5782255865112999690.post-5098908059502752662009-09-27T21:38:17.465-06:002009-09-27T21:38:17.465-06:00this is a really good start, i like that you dont ...this is a really good start, i like that you dont say too much about the characters right away, it makes me want to read more. also i like that it shows how powerful dreams can be sometimes.katnoreply@blogger.com